Lottie's Cloud- Vivian


I hand over the slightly worn ticket that I had been holding onto for the last hour. My pulse quickens at the sound of the paper ripping. The minutes seem to stretch on, like the red staircase before me that vanishes up into a canopy of clouds. At the sight of those steps I close my eyes. I remember my childhood, somewhat blurred around the edges, it slowly comes back into focus.
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The tall silhouette of my father was striking against a palette of colors as we climbed up the stairs towards the entrance. In the lingering air I could already taste the scent of caramel mixed with the sugary undercoat of cotton candy. Large, weathered hands wrapped around mine, and everything seemed to take on a soft golden tone. Enveloped in a cocoon of music and laughter, I was truly convinced that this was an enchantment which happened only once a year.
As soon as we had stepped past the gate, I immediately took off running. My father followed in silent compliance, and his eyes crinkled into a smile every once in a while. That day, nothing could touch me except for the wonders of Alice in Wonderland, Dumbo, and the spinning tea cups. Like any eight year old, I felt nothing but the thrill of excitement as I explored the large, mysterious grounds.
I walked until my heels throbbed with exhaustion, until I could hardly contain anymore. It was a sad moment because I knew I was far from done, there was so much more to be had, but my ragged breath and spinning head disagreed. I needed a place to rest, so I chose a flakey green bench. That was when I saw it.
In front of me was a poster, new and freshly printed, depicting a red staircase that led up and further up until it was but a small point in the sky. However, in my childish delight I was more entranced with the fairies that were scattered about, the yellow and blue and pink dots spilling across. My big round eyes gazed at the block of white letters that read: The Empyrean, Come Experience the Wonders of the Sky! There was no doubt in my mind which ride I was going to take next.
I ran across to the long queue ahead, my little feet a flurry of movement, with my poor father trailing behind me. I waited impatiently as the tickets were purchased, but with a hint of curiosity. Before me there was a board divided into three different levels, each a different color. The different boxes read: $10 to ascend to Jack’s Cloud - A quick taste of the world beneath your feet, $15 to ascend to Sophie’s Cloud - The second layer of clouds is a feast for tired eyes, and $20 to ascend to Lottie’s Cloud - Ever wonder what heaven feels like?
I tugged violently on my father’s sleeve and pointed to Lottie’s Cloud. Of course now that we were here, I only wanted the best, plus I liked the sound of Lottie as it rolled off the tip of my tongue, it was much more charming than the name Jack. So my father bought two blue tickets and off we went. The line was very long, and there was chattering all around, I heard snatches of conversation here and there. I was too young to understand most of it, but the words “new discovery” popped up, and I felt proud to have known what that meant, but the conversation soon grew beyond my understanding as they talked on, something about “gravity” and “particles of cloud vapor”. I soon got bored, listening to what the adults in front of me were saying, instead I was bursting with excitement and ready to walk on clouds.
We slowly climbed up the stairs, every once and a while I would look down, the sight of the amusement park below made me lightheaded. I saw the ant-like people who were so far away, and the occasional speck of color, which I assumed were balloons. The trees became so small, and the roads like pieces of string, twisting and turning. I felt so wonderfully big,  as I held out my hand, pretending to pinch the miniature houses and roller coasters that were so far below.
It took a while, but we finally reached the entrance of the ride, small winged statues greeted us in mid flight. Soon, very soon I would join them and feel the trails of vapor beneath my feet. My father and I stepped across the gate and onto a large wooden platform, while behind us people piled on eager to secure a spot of their own. My ears perked as I heard an announcement from the speakers drift above the inane babble of the crowd. The announcer recited a few simple rules and ended with a short reminder for the children to stay close to their parents. Then came the unmistakeable sound of a loud buzzer reverberating in the air. The volume of the crowd swelled, as we watched the man in a neon blue uniform unbuckle the rope at the front of the platform. The people in front of us moved forward and I too stepped off the platform.
I felt an unexpectedly cold shock at the bottom of my feet. Below me wisps of vapor swirled about in a lazy caress, and flashes of color peeked through the small openings. A soft chuckle stole from my lips, at the clouds that filled the gaps of my toes and tickled arch of my foot. I was giddy, practically humming with satisfaction. I drank in every moment of it. From all direction, beams of slanted golden sunlight filtered through the layer of clouds above. I all but ran to the next gate. It seemed I couldn’t get to Lottie’s cloud fast enough.
I called for my father, my voice echoed into the ringing stillness of the misty trails. So up we climbed, the colors fading softly from pink, to purple, to a clear blue sky. I was silent for once, lost in my own thoughts, there was no breeze up here to disturb the air nor its surroundings, so for a good hour or so everything stood still in this blanket of white.
The mist slowly began to break away, until I could see little puffs of white clouds, baby clouds that clung to their mothers in the elevated plane. I tore a chunk out of a nearby cloud and made little ball of vapor, throwing it as far as I could. It was a peculiar sensation, tossing air, I could see it but I could not feel it. After a while, watching the little ball of cloud drift away from my vision, I lay down, my weariness washing swiftly over me. Everything was so impossibly blue, a vibrant clear blue.  Such a strong blue, it brought the inevitable sting of tears to my eyes.
I felt my father lay down beside me and I heard the steady rhythm of his breathing. And then I knew, I felt I could just let go, drift away with the clouds that cajoled and crooned so sweetly. Instead my father’s hands found mine and I felt the warm, warm pressure of it anchoring me to my body. The warmth curled up beside me as I lay there with it, my eyes closed. I felt a deep, true contentment fill the cracks of my skin. I was painted over, fresh and new like the clouds that surrounded me. Gradually my world became dimmer as I slipped into sleep.
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That is where my memory ends. I try to hold onto the lingering images still pressed against the backs of my eyes. But a jolt from the side brings me back to this present, twenty year old me. My grip loosens, and I watch the memory trickle away. And before I know it, the line in front is moving again, my legs carried along with it. I climb up the stairs once more, focusing intently on the worn red steps passing me by. It is a very long while before I shift my gaze down to look at the world below me. Everything has changed. There is no longer the warm sparkling glow, nor musical dance of color and sound. I asked myself whether I was expecting something. Perhaps I was hoping for a silly old notion, an enchantment that happens only once a year.
I reach the top of the stairs to the same gateway, now weathered to a dull gold. My steps become hesitant, they drag behind slightly. Finally I reach the platform, but there is no crowd today. Only me and a few other people, children and their parents. The announcement comes on, it seems to boom loudly, louder than I remember it, crashing into my ears. The people in front of me begin to walk, and there is a brief moment where I forget to follow.
I step out and  feel the cold sting of vapor swirling below me. It still takes me by surprise. And gradually I begin to feel the stirrings of something shift, a warm comforting feeling that fights its way to the surface. I take my socks off, and tread barefoot onto the cottony expanse, my feet planted firmly into this layer of cloud. There are more advertisements now, more than I remember. But one thing stands out. A board with different colored layers. It reads: ascend to Lottie’s Cloud - Ever wonder what heaven feels like?

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